For Friday: a revision (a criticism of the work attached “fiction 2”) of one of your short stories. It should be at least 1000 words, but no more than 2 pages. Alongside this, you will hand in a one-page reflection on the process. You will need only ONE copy of each.
I am attaching Fiction #2 which is the story that is being revised. Also, I am attaching progressive comments from my classmates that will give you an idea on some points to base off.
incorporate classmate feedback into your revision comments
1. 1000 word criticism on positive and negatives of the fiction #2 piece writing style, incorporate classmate comments, single spaced MLA
2. One double spaced reflection of the feelings towards writing the 1000 word revision